I had a lot of trouble with the chapter taking me straight up a full week just to get it done. I started out without mentioning Marion but ended up turning a two sentence mention about the new dungeon in Lancaster to what it ended up being.
I also felt that time seemed to be moving too quickly and I was skipping too much in the dungeon, but I felt if I just kept dragging it on it would have turned our boring. I am still not 100% happy with this chapter but at this point I just wanted it to be over with just so I can move on with the other things I have in store.
I had a bit of a debate what was going to happen when Belinda destroyed the dungeon, but I think I have gotten it worked out how its going to go, but you are going to have to wait another chapter or maybe even 2 to find out just what effects it had on her.
As always thanks for reading.