Chapter 52-55.5 Notes

Belinda just loves her surprises, and parties… I debated for a while about accepting the three from Queen but I thought that 3 at once would be a little much and the little girl would complicate things as well.

It works out in the end as even though there is little mention of them after they still play a few roles later on. I initially meant for Logan to be a bit more snobby then her turned out to be, but it worked out.

Trae is only half but other then a few brief mentions this is the first time a elf or any other race then beastkin and human that has made an appearance.

That was another topic a friend of mine brought up so I thought I would pass it along. I had a plan for Trae for future chapters but it has yet to come out, but that doesn’t mean it won’t so we will have to wait and see.

I am sure as soon as you read about Belinda’s reasoning for a cow beastkin you knew that plan was going to backfire.

I don’t remember if I posted Queen’s dungeon core information page during her training or not, but her first boss monster that died her first day of training was named Joker.

Along with Heart, Diamond, and Clover which is another name for the club suite in a deck of cards. I don’t remember which one it was but in history Bell was used for one of the suites I believe it was swords, cups, bell, and coins iirc.

Just thought I would throw that out there.

I had to tone down Belinda’s outburst a bit, as I felt it was a little more then it needed to be, I still feel that I don’t know if Belinda should of made such a big deal out of it or not.

Maybe with after how things went the night before, and everything else building up she just reached a breaking point. I think it was more of the point of frustration then it was anger or anything like that.

I enjoyed the reaction that Belinda had when she found out Two-Twelve never used a toilet before… I don’t think I have mentioned it yet so I thought it was worth mentioning that the dungeon and house were built using 3D map making tool to make sure I didn’t screw up and overlap a room.

That was one reason the house I intended to be 2 story ended up 3. Maybe some day I will have enough going where I will have a section with the just dungeon layout, character sheets and stuff like that, but for the moment they are crude at best.

I think Belinda and Two-Twelve reached the point where they could finally become intimate with one another I seriously debating having there moment together in the story at all, or just having it happen off record so to speak.

I feel that putting it  as its own chapter and labeling it at such was the right move.

Anyway as always thanks for reading.

Dragon_knight79347

 

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